whine and geez…..
by doreen peri
Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-08-16 20:46:00
Parent message is 10703
nothing to whine about with fine writing like this….
fabulous last stanza… i especially liked this…
“it makes me stop on my way home from the grocery
and wonder how such a pale faced old man
can keep that smile on
night after night
scaring someone thousands of miles from my door..”
i can’t figure out the same thing thousands of miles or minutes or thoughts from my own Dor which has been locked for so long
sorry, i won’t whine……. geeezzzzzzz
wonderful write here… thank you for the read