whine and geez…..

by doreen peri

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-08-16 20:46:00

Parent message is 10703
nothing to whine about with fine writing like this….

fabulous last stanza… i especially liked this…

“it makes me stop on my way home from the grocery
and wonder how such a pale faced old man
can keep that smile on
night after night
scaring someone thousands of miles from my door..”

i can’t figure out the same thing thousands of miles or minutes or thoughts from my own Dor which has been locked for so long

sorry, i won’t whine……. geeezzzzzzz

wonderful write here… thank you for the read




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