excellent
by user not found
Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-08-10 14:42:00
Parent message is 11181
this is amazing, one of the most impressive works (if not THE most impressive), ive seen on this board. good for you, keep it up.
i think your combinations of words are absolutly beautiful, and though you change from one focus to another, the piece really flows well.
excellent. i look forward to reading more of your work.