Untitled (please critique w/ brutal honesty)

by Punk Junkie

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-07-17 18:12:00

It ain’t enough-

So they give us
junk and cleavage and sugar
and wax and aluminum cans
and soft skin (ahh…)
It keeps us busy for
the time being pawned
off for projected testaments
of our triviality
-ism
-ness

And idiotic lines and
calculators and lacy things and
stories we cannot yet (communique)

My, my, aren’t we
deep little children
huh?
huh?