ya and i

by jazzcatalley

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-07-16 23:32:00

Parent message is 13316
have always respected that
and liked reading her sensous feeling style

nevertheless, she still has room to learn
and grow, as a writer, as do we all

its is not just about sentamental feel good
feel safe, feel like your ego is a mask that has been glued to your body, therefore someone like Judith is a more mature writer, or Doreen

sorry if that hurts feelings, but if you put them out there, and you want to be a writer, then
you need to be bold, that is what Beat, is, was,
all about, not fearing to explore other
modes of experiance, if Kate wants to
remain in a safe world, her writing
will show it, and there are plenty of people that want to read just that kind of sentamental stuff
but she does have style and she does have
flare, and i was mearly tring to draw that out of her, its not always easy taking candy away from a baby either….