second

by kairo

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-06-19 17:53:00

Parent message is 17114
when eyes come first
it’s what comes second
that will make all the difference.
especially when the shades
of those vision circles
cause a piece of you to die
with every opening and closing.

the title is highly interesting…oh, how i do love this vein you’re writing in…lovely.

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