show and tell

by doreen peri

Posted to Action Poetry on 2002-05-19 20:08:00

Parent message is 189310
you show, i’ll tell

how ’bout that? *grin

awwwwwwshucks, jota…… i’m so glad you liked this and your applause is wonderful but PLEASE do NOT give me the clap!!

😉

you’re very kind….. this piece needs lots of work….. i’m wondering tonight, to be honest, why i even try writing any more…. it’s all sounding the same and i’m very depressed about it….. it’s like…. sad to me…. to search my archives and find the same words used over and over in different combinations with the same theme of Love and Lust….

i’m trying to think of a new take on the whole thing…

something nasty…. something crude maybe…. something more teasingly lustful…… maybe give a portion…. show a peak into the ventricle without exposing the chambers……. perhaps an auricle of a beat with one hand clapping…

ythink? could there be a sound for something ilke that?

i wonder

and i wander

and i stand up on the stage to accept your roses…

OUCH!!! dammit!! *suckingthebloodoffmyfinger*…

i KNOW!! i need to create a new kind of rose without thorns!! *grin

do you think that the rose is the perfect image of Love?

the rose BUSH maybe, but not the cut rose because those wilt eventually

oooooooohhhhhhhgod….. i’m gonna figure this whole thing out yet, believe me and when i do, i will let you know what i come up with if you’re still around and if you’re not? i’ll let myself know anyway and the rest of the world if they aren’t too busy getting up to get popcorn

😉

thank you, my friend……..