Blow ……Please critque and dont hold back

by JaySmith

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-05-15 13:20:00

breathing, wet,
lips–tender
beating heart
fast-pace breath
take your mouth
and wrap it
tightly
use your lips
to glid–
guide towards
the ultimate
bliss–take my shirt
and ball it up
in your fist
your hair, long, blonde
falls to the side and
sticks,
with sweat,
to my thighs
faster faster
go go go
dont stop now–almost there
yes yes yes
slowly–take your hand
and lead me
to bliss.