nice catch

by RevelationNC

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-04-19 16:16:00

Parent message is 21185
i like the story of the poem– very nicely done. the poem itself is very nice, but i found myself actually distracted by the rhyming. it was so strong in the poem that it detracted from the meaning itself. besides that, though, very nice.

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