wierd thing

by Anya

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-04-10 17:33:00

Parent message is 22141
a wierd thing happened… at first i didn’t like this song/poem so much… and then i re-read it and there’s actually something really interesting in the almost childish rhyme… maybe you could actually add more to it, because it’s really growing on me.. yeah, just re-read it again and it just gets better and better, reminds me of a john lennon poem “I sat belonely Under a tree/ a little lady sing to me…” yeah, i really like this one actually.
~Anya

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