critique welcome

by mindlosing

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-03-31 05:07:00

Came to me in the shower cause im in a good mood. Im in a good mood cause this board and cause it actually looks like spring outside.

For her eyes she has volcanoes
They erupt when she smiles
Bathing me in molten lava

dk

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