nice…

by wend

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-03-26 19:35:00

Parent message is 23547
Wonderful stream of consciousness. But I think a few periods would be effective. Like “organic trusting mystique. How we resist the source” would allow the reader to breathe, and emphasize the power of “How we resist…”

Also some elipses would allow the pause and separation of ideas without as strong an emphasis as a period.

Nice, though.