I really liked this…

by RobotGoat

Posted to Action Poetry on 2002-08-30 22:05:00

Parent message is 272095
I cannot say I made sense of it as a whole yet, but I will re-read it. I like how it seems to…flash quick scenes? My favorite part was the section involving the string holding your mind as it floated….I actually wandered off there for a second, thinking about this movie they made me watch in the 1st grade…it was about this kid with a red balloon, and the balloon gets away and floats off………