kate…

by firecracker

Posted to Action Poetry on 2002-10-17 13:38:00

Parent message is 305798
i’ve been wanting to write a certain poem about october… but i think you’ve just done it. the opening/closing lines are really excellent wrappers… and this:

the mist hangs low on the tips of cornstalks
while the night seems to never fully disappear.

is beautiful. i can feel the terrifying feeling of surrender to love in these words.

i am still a big fan.

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