poetry and kitchen help

by doreen peri

Posted to Action Poetry on 2003-02-08 07:10:00

Parent message is 377967
a poet is writing a poem with
a kitchen help metaphor.
which lines are stronger?

1- This will be our final chef.
Perfect sauces, service, flambes.

or

2- We fervently hope this will be our final chef;
sauces perfect, service fine, flambes delicate in wine.
But time will tell. Chefs come and go.




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