poetry and kitchen help
by doreen peri
Posted to Action Poetry on 2003-02-08 07:10:00
Parent message is 377967
a poet is writing a poem with
a kitchen help metaphor.
which lines are stronger?
1- This will be our final chef.
Perfect sauces, service, flambes.
or
2- We fervently hope this will be our final chef;
sauces perfect, service fine, flambes delicate in wine.
But time will tell. Chefs come and go.