babe
by __
Posted to Action Poetry on 2003-03-12 21:29:00
Parent message is 402388
it was a “fake poem” because i left every negative thought and feeling that i had at the time out of my words.
it all just came out in reply to you. writing a happy poem at a time when i feel like i felt today, when i wrote this, is like forcing yourself to smile when you’re sad or angry–it hurts. thus the “etched in stone” phrase.
thanks for the comments.. i think i like the surprise of yours better though.