i need honest opinions ,im about to be published

by angel_headed_hipster

Posted to Action Poetry on 2003-09-21 20:55:00

black pool of cruelty show us what to think, bewitching bronze chapperones seducing our moth eaten veins. pods of lightning charged emotion controlling our shoe box lives. devil tried trixters, unsung heroes, square headed suits create me a pangaea utopia only fit for my eyes. iron filled caverns worth more than gold.until the day im laid to rest misery loves company.