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by vance

Posted to Action Poetry on 2004-01-17 02:17:00

Parent message is 583383
first two lines really set the rest off
i loved this
i just sloth-slid down into town to get the paper
not in – cos the roads are bad
i came back and re-read your poem
thought of some poor guy in the highlands
with a clenched ass and a death grip
thanks

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