I always thought the Ocean was a noisy place
by zero hero
Posted to Action Poetry on 2004-01-23 20:59:00
Parent message is 588328
eidetic images
I always wanted one of those
must be thirty years ago
I stood atop a 20 story pyramid
and saw the winter ocean
so many miles to the horizon
and a deserted beach
that image gives me solitude
I wanted to ask you a question about that last line, but it is not my place.
but it left me wondering, that may have been your intent
nice work thanks