beautiful

by Mie

Posted to Action Poetry on 2004-07-03 17:35:00

Parent message is 672541
I did read it slowly as you recommended, and I felt such a beautiful and mature message and tone. I appreciated this piece, and the ones preceding it. Looking forward to more of your work…

“among women

in red kashmiri shawls,

with red feet, red palms

and red lips
quivering to a prayer”

— Effective image…resonated in my mind and throat.