interior sounds…

by doreen peri

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-08-28 19:48:00

Parent message is 9699
this is fine writing… interior sounds of
consonants & vowels, echoed throughout…..

with imagery so vivid… alliteration… lots
of tools used with skill to create a feeling,
a mix of feelings… seeing through your eyes
emotions from inside

ohhhh damn… i liked this oh so much!!!


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