Dear Izza!
by primavera
Posted to Haiku Board on 2002-05-25 10:43:00
Parent message is 192593
(this is no haiku – ha! this is a sensitive outlet, so NC=no critique)
What you teach about Haiku
is interesting, but scaring
amateur Haiku writers
when these lessons occur on the board itself!
Let’s ask Levi Asher – this is his after all-
wouldn’t it be
better to send discussion
elsewhere on Litkicks
and leave the Haiku board
for readers to decide
what is good or bad
(unless they mark it with PC=please critique)
to be sincere
I don’t dare to even try now
and I don’t find
the inspiration
to write for my drawer
that never replies
nor inspires
I won’t be bothering you for long,
cuz I’m no native speaker here – and maybe you know me!
Nothing against you, Izza, but
***haikus are a sensitive thing!***