i can feel it…

by Radka

Posted to Haiku Board on 2001-04-09 18:19:00

Parent message is 26274
it has this sense of desperation which i think is great. but for some reason my head keeps wanting to substitute the word ‘hope’ where you have ‘hold’. it is just somthing i’ve probably heard before but i’m probably the only one who gets that!
it doesn’t deter from you poem in any way.
great.