Five haiku–PC!!!

by pottygok

Posted to Haiku Board on 2003-08-13 19:21:00

Since a few people have asked for examples and what not, here are five recent haiku of mine. Feel free to comment/critique if you get a chance.





dead mouse
a warm breeze
twitches its foot





her perfume–
I barely miss the possum
crossing the road





yellow moon
raccoons in the alley
tear open my trash





road cones–
pieces of orange peel
from the truck ahead of me





moon sliver
the crunch of a cockroach
beneath my bare foot