by pottygok

Posted to Haiku Board on 2004-04-26 14:23:00

Parent message is 640298
This seems like a cause-effect (or, possibly, effect-cause) haiku, and thus, creates a non-moment narrative. Still, I like your personification (animalification???) with the word “barks”.

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