what is haiku (PC)

by tinker jack

Posted to Haiku Board on 2004-05-03 14:56:00

Parent message is 642906
blank intent
white words on white paper
passing moment

I got this one to deal with

hands grip carotids
suicide by matricide
a horrified look

way too personal for anyone to make sense of,
maybe yours is too,
all i can say is that it “blanked me”
stopped my mind, tricked it or whatever it is tha ku’s are supposed to do,like seeing what is on the end of my fork, reminded me of a moment when I was about eight locked in a closet for punishment.

my point is I like it, it worked for me
i hope this was useful, i don’t know enough about haiku to pc it. maybe it is just my gallows sense of humor






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