unruffled

by Beth Vieira

Posted to Haiku Board on 2004-07-02 10:16:00

Parent message is 672154
But what is the subject/object of this unusual verb? the leaves. If you had a slip of the finger and you said “unmuffled” it would be the bells. In other words there is a lot that the haiku sets up and I’m not sure that I wouldn’t play around more with the final line.