long but good

by Tim Cunningham

Posted to Poetry on 2002-02-08 17:49:00

Parent message is 114645
Some nice language usage :”The people vanished into a lost reality…” (that whole last stanza is awesome). It maybe is a bit too long? (but this is very personal, I am more a fan of shorter poems, so …). Anyway, great ideas and stylistically some very fine elements