critique please
by paris
Posted to Poetry on 2002-02-26 14:38:00
you speak through words
that pounce off your tongue
and whip up against my ears
(my heart)
you, hardly knowing their strength
and me, hardly knowing how to tell you
they bite
they roar
they thrash and show their fangs
and you throw them
up and down
and out
and through
and into every bit of silence
that stands there innocently