whatcha talkin, swan song
by judih.
Posted to Poetry on 2002-04-12 03:47:00
Parent message is 162341
brilliant
leave off the end part
where you explain
it’s totally irrelevent to the diamond joy of your sides
of revelation
(oh…when i put it that way, it is relevent…o well, please keep writing here, Vas (may i?) )
much sincerity,
judih