A.W.

by dionisio

Posted to Poetry on 2002-08-30 15:33:00

Parent message is 271934
dig your critique man, think you’re spot on about that line. The poem was meant to be a lot shorter, just sort of unravelled in the making, so I kind of left it, just to finish, but I may have a tweak later.? of the poem.

I see what you mean with the idea of the gap, but worried it might beat the flow, have to see.

23yrs young and Robert Frost is pretty damn cool, I think you would dig some of his stuff. Acquainted with the Night, The Road not Taken, Fire and Ice and Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening. All worth a peek.