Dynamic…
by zygotenmycoffee
Posted to Poetry on 2002-10-14 08:20:00
Parent message is 303275
…language…love the imagery…especially the first line: Cut the sun by razor blade/and release the yoke
Comparing the sun to an egg is ingenious…all life begins in the form of a an egg…& essential life supporting sustenance is derived from yolk/nucleus of egg, just as all life on earth derives sustenance from the sun!
Good stuff!