freewriten-

by grey

Posted to Poetry on 2002-10-24 00:38:00

Parent message is 309530
thanks for the feed back.
it wasn’t a cut up specificaly, though the way I wrote it hoped to jar the reader in that way.
and I’m glad to hear you felt the words instead of read them (though if you do, it’s a description of my saturday night – physicaly and emotionaly). -escaping the ‘real’ meaning of words and giving them real meanings is what I aspire to do with my writing.

“sometimes some struck time bomb tickers tokens with dynamo igniters.
someone’s sums, stuck trees long limbs, in the eye of dynamite inspite her, objection.
because it was meant to be, what words were meant to be from, and find what they found, and left for lost.”