wow…

by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods

Posted to Poetry on 2003-01-14 12:06:00

Parent message is 359026
The mood you convey in this is rather impressive. I almost forgot I was reading about a home…and began to feel like you were writing about a mental institution!

Very well expressed. Mood and atmosphere are PRO in this piece.

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