Weeell….

by big_al_duf

Posted to Poetry on 2003-03-09 23:50:00

Parent message is 400264
It starts out abit slow and sad, I was pleasantly surprised about mid-poem with the rising speed…the end seemed far more optomistic than the begining. I like. Well balanced and delicious.

Best wishes,

adam

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