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by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods
Posted to Poetry on 2003-03-12 11:27:00
Parent message is 401768
This is definitely deep. And a little, well…morbid if you do not take offense to that. The clawing of the organs. Ick. =p
Obviously you did a good job here though, or portraying such thoughts and provoking them from your audience if it made me feel so.
Comparing a fetus to a vampire…ironically, a good comparison. Good job here on your ideaology.