oh rain…

by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods

Posted to Poetry on 2003-04-03 12:16:00

Parent message is 417646
This is so deeply yet lightly beautiful. I don’t understand necessarily all what it was, but this piece captured a little bit of me with it as I read.

<<"The ribbons that we read begin
Only single color and become decades
Of loch and prisms of curl”>>

Oh but this is magnificent…

Simply ended

<<"And to be regrown">>

I don’t know. Call me a dramatic. But I love pieces that end in a BOLD and self-placing statement that almost says more for the piece than the rest of it.

Great job here. I love this.