That’s…

by Barry L.

Posted to Poetry on 2001-10-13 06:26:00

Parent message is 41598
some ritual.
good poem,
but I think
one about
the let down
when you come down&
you realize
that you’re broke
cause
all your hard earned money
has just gone up
in smoke
Would be more appropriate,
that is unless you’re independently wealthy.
I believe you’re going to be all right.
Be careful.
Unless you wrote this from imagination,then you did
a damn good job.