Uncle B…

by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods

Posted to Poetry on 2003-04-15 09:17:00

Parent message is 426064
<<"...Onto the orange sunsets of my tiled floors.">>

Beautiful imagery here. I felt the warmth and saw the vivid coloring of the tiles…how beautiful…

<<"And the garlic salt spilled next to the basil.">>

I wanted to point out this line, as it gave me a bit of a tummy tickle…too many a time have I walked into my own kitchen and behold…either the garlic or the onion salt was spilt on my stove…

May your life always be full of smiles =)

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