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by frontal-abstraction

Posted to Poetry on 2003-05-23 14:35:00

Parent message is 454902
was just an image I saw after placing my finger tips in the appropriate position on my keyboard and closing my eyes…cleared my thoughts and typed whatever came to mind.

Thanks for the quick response 🙂

in_extremis has me on a momentary editing spree and I think this a good place to post my edited version of this poem:

Plush Canvas

Paper moon safety pinned
Cluster points lit from behind
Shadow points black, on white walls
Disorganized crime spree reception
Guesses tagged toes in red puddles
Reign down chaos terror stride
Sublime echoes unfold the scene
Replicates matter, form silicon clones
Punctured saline drains eye bubbles
Reflection swells salt mine flush
Liquid shape shifting truths
Boils over chemical flames
Burning flesh melts, to black velvet


it needed some comas