a very rough

by starsailor

Posted to Poetry on 2003-07-16 22:06:00

Parent message is 486056
translation,

Canoes and silence

the reality nothing free
between gray hair and rusty dress (told you this was rough)
water against wood
intermittent lights
from the islands

Was I close? Thanks Arcadia, I had to find my English/Spanish dictionary for this reply.

Reality is free
for we pay for the illusions
we create


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