Good, but then…

by G

Posted to Poetry on 2004-01-22 19:40:00

Parent message is 587567
Strong poetry, excellent use of language in conveying imagery, but it ends weak.

You’ve got an excellent poets voice, I like it, I like it a lot, I like it too much. You’ll go far.

Keep writing, and keep posting.

I look forward to your next post.

G.