powerful

by Mie

Posted to Poetry on 2004-02-25 11:33:00

Parent message is 608759
all the words you have chosen seem to be the most charged words you could possibly use in the context. I like the feeling, but I was distracted by the mention of concubines and tequila in the same breath. Sounds a little like an anachronism to me.

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