thas some good sheet main
by Elgi
Posted to Poetry on 2004-04-04 21:54:00
Parent message is 631936
no seriously, its pretty good. sounds a tad shakespearean (not a bad thing if thats what your thinkin i was thinkin but if you werent thinking that then disregard) like it could be part of a soliquey in a play. keep up the good work soldier!