If You Don’t Write it Right the First Time

by Deez

Posted to Poetry on 2004-04-05 13:50:00

Parent message is 632651
you can never really fix it-
Therein the flaw of deficiancy lies
never to be covered
or rolled aside-
Your words could not fathom
nor your hands imagine
the weight or texture
of the void-
Sometimes words
are too few to describe
so you must cut them short
and be satisfied
by the small raptures
they have provided
your insides..

liked your poem btw…but it seems like it’s just the beginning stanza, dig deeper..