thought this response over for a while

by firebottle

Posted to Poetry on 2004-04-14 20:43:00

Parent message is 636490
fermenting in the marsh
growing bubbly like a thought
the chill wind blew
it was musical

imagine forever
being forests and nature
this is how it once was
can you call this stupid and heartfelt?

seajay i do like your stuff
but it seems like you’re stuck
grow beyond material life
and you’ll probly end some inner strife

just a thought

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