thought this response over for a while
by firebottle
Posted to Poetry on 2004-04-14 20:43:00
Parent message is 636490
fermenting in the marsh
growing bubbly like a thought
the chill wind blew
it was musical
imagine forever
being forests and nature
this is how it once was
can you call this stupid and heartfelt?
seajay i do like your stuff
but it seems like you’re stuck
grow beyond material life
and you’ll probly end some inner strife
just a thought