CHILDS

by starsailor

Posted to Poetry on 2004-07-14 09:27:00

Parent message is 679749
I wanted the only punctuation to be the question marks so am satisfied with that. Could you please direct me to the typos? I have reread it several times and don’t see them.

I guess I tend to write short lines and always have as that is the way my mind works when writing poetry. The line breaks read okay in my head but I will give some consideration to your suggestion and thank you for the reply and the encouragement.

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