dear darkblood

by sanfranciscobabe

Posted to Stories on 2002-02-24 11:44:00

Parent message is 128433
Hello there.. I am more usually an observer here, rather than a contributor, but wanted to respond.
Thanks for your story, I thought it amazingly well written. I didn’t expect to like it (due to personal circumstances – I enjoy your writing talent – see my recent story on the ‘Story board’ for more information) but I was involved in your butterflies piece from the first minute, and quickly found the sympathy with the suffering man that I expected to lack.
You created a good sense of suspense there!
The beautiful image of the butterflies carried through too.
Write more here.. thanks
Peace x.