once you start, its no stopping..read it folks!

by mudshark

Posted to Stories on 2002-05-07 14:58:00

Parent message is 180255
its pulsating, and its a grieviius piece of action literature. all throught the hasty language. however, you could have chapperized it a bit, i dont b-leave it would conflict with the pace.just a coupla chapps..
but hey, i really got into it! it was a 20 min read, and i dont do it to often on tha site, but like i said, once you start it up..
and the setting!
man, its a writers dream coming up with a neath idea like that. just getts you painting out the caracters, purging out scenes.
this was a damn fine job, Danton!
lets see you do THAT again..

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