well told

by anniefay

Posted to Stories on 2002-09-27 04:01:00

Parent message is 292670
i like your use of words, especially

When that happened he sat at the table listening, and let his cares slip to the floor.

this is good – and i hope things get better for our candy store owner… maybe the lady will come bye for some marshmallows and sing to the music on his radio – just for him

thanks


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