Nice little…

by zygotenmycoffee

Posted to Stories on 2002-10-11 10:46:00

Parent message is 301609
…piece of Flash Fiction. Clever. Funny. Your description of the sweaty, undulating body even had me grossed out. I like the way you forego conventional punctuation, it adds a sense of urgency that compliments the narrator’s desire to split from this ugly situation ASAP!